The corall reefs are dying but why?
The number of colourless corall reefs has increased in the last decade. If a corall reef loses his colour it’s almost dead. The reason for this process are warmer oceans and water pollution. Coralls are living togehter with tiny oranism that give them their colour and help them to grow. This system is very fragile and they can’t deal with warmer oceans. Corall reefs are the second most popular habitat for animal species on the earth. They are very important for animal welfare and aswell a beautiful retreat for fish.
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bibuchri
Hi Felix, the death of coral reefs is a topic that should affect us all. You could have posted this text in the category “natural resource use”.
You start off with a question which is a good method to get the interest of your reader. In the following paragraph you provide an answer in short sentences and simple words so that everybody can understand your message. That’s great.
But at the end you’re missing the persuasive part of your post. Give examples on how everybody can contribute to save the coral reefs. Warn what will probably happen if we don’t do anything about that topic. Otherwise, you won’t convice your readers.